Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and directly responds to the question, but it can be improved by adding a concise topic sentence and one supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and avoid unnecessary words like filler pauses. Try to provide a specific brief reason or a short consequence to enrich the response.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Because my family lived in a small apartment, there wasn’t enough space to store one, so I usually borrowed a neighbour’s bike to ride in the park on weekends.

提案: The answer is short and contains pauses and grammatical errors. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb agreement, and at least one specific supporting detail connected with a linking word (e.g., 'for example', 'because'). Avoid filler sounds and make vocabulary slightly more varied (e.g., 'common', 'widely used').

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many teenagers use bicycles to commute to school and there are dedicated bike lanes in several cities, which makes cycling a convenient and common choice.

× Yes, it is popular.

✓ Yes, they are popular.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the verb and pronoun must also be plural. 'It is' refers to a singular noun; use 'they are' to agree in number with 'bikes'. Suggestion: identify the noun's number (singular/plural) and choose matching pronouns and verbs.

× I saw a lot of uh, teenagers using bike.

✓ I saw a lot of teenagers using bikes.

'Using bike' is incorrect because 'bike' here should be plural after 'a lot of teenagers' or preceded by an article. Also 'a lot of' requires a plural noun when referring to multiple items. Correct forms: 'using bikes' or 'using a bike' if referring individually. Suggestion: after 'a lot of teenagers' use the plural noun 'bikes' to match the plural subject and express that many teenagers rode bikes.