Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Melhore a resposta fornecendo uma sentença-tópico completa e acrescentando detalhes específicos (quando, que tipo, com quem, memórias). Use conectores simples se adicionar mais de uma ideia. Limite a resposta a até 5 frases e evite respostas de uma palavra.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle with training wheels when I was about six years old, and I used to ride it every afternoon around my neighborhood. My father taught me how to balance and I remember feeling proud the first time I rode without the training wheels.

提案: Corrija a gramática e desenvolva a resposta com uma razão ou exemplo concreto. Comece com uma frase-tópico completa, depois acrescente uma justificativa usando conectores como 'because' ou 'for example'. Mantenha clareza e concisão (máx. 5 frases).

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and rental services, so cycling is a convenient and affordable option for daily commuting.

× Yes, has very popular.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

The student omitted a subject and used incorrect verb form. In present simple for third-person plural the correct verb is 'are' (to be) and a subject is required; 'has' is incorrect here. Suggestion: include the subject 'they' (referring to bikes) and use 'are' to form 'they are very popular'.