Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Risposta diretta e naturale, ma manca sviluppo: aggiungi una frase con dettagli specifici (es. età, tipo di bicicletta, motivo per cui non eri bravo) e usa un collegamento breve per rendere il discorso più fluido.

例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about seven, but I wasn't very good at riding it. As a result, I often fell and my parents would fix the scratches, so I used it mainly for short rides near home.

提案: La risposta inizia bene ma è disorganizzata e contiene errori (grammatica e parole mancanti). Ristruttura in frasi chiare, usa parole di collegamento (for example, because, however) e fornisci dettagli specifici (dati, paragoni concreti, conseguenze). Evita frasi interrotte.

例: Not really. In Italy bicycles are less popular than in countries like Denmark because we have fewer dedicated cycle lanes and drivers are less used to sharing the road. For example, in my city there are only a few bike paths, so many people prefer cars or public transport.

× Yes, I had a bike but I wasn't very good at it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike, but I wasn't very good at riding it.

The original sentence is mostly correct in tense but omits the gerund after 'good at'. English requires a verb+ -ing after 'good at' to indicate the activity. Add 'riding' to clarify the action: 'good at riding it'. Also add a comma before 'but' for readability.

× Not really actually.

✓ Not really, actually.

This is a minor punctuation issue rather than a tense error. Adding a comma makes the pause natural in spoken English. The tense is present and appropriate.

× I mean at least they're here in Italy, they're not as popular as they are in Denmark, for example because here know there aren't a lot of cycle lanes but Olympic cities

✓ I mean, at least here in Italy they're not as popular as they are in Denmark, for example, because there aren't a lot of cycle lanes here, except in some Olympic cities.

Multiple problems: word order and extra words ('here' placed incorrectly, 'know' is incorrect) and missing commas. The speaker used 'here' and 'they're' awkwardly; reordering improves clarity. 'Know' appears to be a mistyped word and should be removed. Also clarify the contrast by adding 'except in some Olympic cities' to make the sentence grammatical and clear. Use commas to separate clauses.