Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering and made grammar mistakes. Give a direct response with a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and correct verb tense. Use linking words if adding details. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it almost every day after school. Because I lived near a park, I practiced there with my friends, which helped me gain confidence quickly.

提案: Again the student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an opinion. Provide a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, moreover). Keep answers concise and natural.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and rental schemes, so commuting by bike is convenient and affordable for lots of residents.

× Did you have a bike when you're child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'you're' (you are), which is a contraction for the present tense and incorrect here. The sentence asks about the past, so the past tense pronoun form 'you were' is required. Replace 'you're' with 'you were' to match past tense context and correct pronoun form.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple appropriately for asking about a general situation, the plural noun 'bikes' agrees with the verb 'are', and the preposition 'in' and noun phrase 'your country' are used correctly.