Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse n'est pas claire et contient des mots sans rapport. Vous devez répondre directement à la question avec une phrase sur le fait d'avoir (ou non) un vélo, puis ajouter une ou deux phrases de détails spécifiques (par exemple qui l'utilisait, où et pourquoi). Utilisez des mots de liaison simples pour la cohérence et évitez les phrases non pertinentes.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to the park every afternoon. I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels, which made me feel very proud.

提案: La réponse ne répond pas à la question et contient des expressions incohérentes. Répondez d'abord par une opinion claire (yes/no/partly), puis expliquez brièvement pourquoi avec un ou deux exemples concrets (transport, loisirs, environnement). Utilisez des mots de liaison comme 'because' ou 'for example' pour structurer la réponse.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental schemes, and many students ride to school to avoid traffic.

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✓ No, I didn't. I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence is not a grammatical response to the examiner's question and contains a jumble of words that do not form a coherent clause. This is a sentence structure error: there is no clear subject-verb-object relationship and the tense is inappropriate. Suggestion: Form a complete sentence that directly answers the question. Use a negative past simple if you did not have a bike: 'No, I didn't. I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' If you did, say 'Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.' Keep subject and past-tense verb consistent and avoid unrelated words like 'video controller' or 'song.'

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✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Many people ride them for short trips and exercise.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unrelated to the examiner's question; words like 'pooped up on top of it' are nonsensical in context. This is a sentence structure error: the response lacks a coherent subject-verb structure and appropriate vocabulary. Suggestion: Provide a direct answer about popularity using present simple for general facts: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' Then add a reason: 'Many people ride them for short trips and exercise.' Avoid irrelevant or invented phrases and ensure each clause has a clear subject and verb.