Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答其实是把考官的问题重复了，而没有给出任何信息。要直接回答问题并补充一到两句具体细节，例如是否有自行车、什么时候有的、经常骑到哪里、是否和朋友一起骑等。回答要简短自然（不超过5句），并使用连词使表达连贯。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. I rode it almost every day to visit my grandparents and to play with friends in the neighborhood, and it helped me feel independent.

提案: 同样你的回答只是重复了问题，未提供观点或细节。应直接表明你的观点（是或不是），然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持，比如城市通勤、共享单车的普及或地区差异。注意使用连接词（for example, because, however）让答案更流畅。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and shared-bike services are widely available in cities.

× Did you have a bike where you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

原句将副词/连词“when”（表示“在……的时候”）误写为“where”（表示“在哪里”）。在询问过去某一时间段是否拥有某物时，应使用“when”。建议：将“where”替换为“when”，并注意区分表示时间的连词（when）与表示地点的疑问词（where）。

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

该句语法正确。句子使用一般现在时询问一般事实或观点，主谓一致、时态和词序均正确。建议：保持原句表达即可。