Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите и упростите ответ, используйте правильное время и одну-две дополнительные детали. Начните с темы (короткое утверждение), затем добавьте причину или пример. Избегайте повторов и ошибок времен (используйте Past Simple для событий в прошлом).

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child because I lived in a small village where there was lots of quiet road. I often rode it with my friends after school, and it was my favourite way to explore the area.

提案: Сформулируйте короткий основной ответ и добавьте 1–2 конкретные причины, используя связки (for example, because, so). Проверьте грамматику (use 'cycling' correctly and fix word order). Избегайте словесного нагромождения и повторов.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Russia. For example, many people cycle in the summer because it is a healthy and cheap way to get around, and our cities often have scenic routes that make cycling enjoyable.

× When I was a child, of course I have a bike because I think that I live I lived in a small village and my favourite activity was riding my bike

✓ When I was a child, of course I had a bike because I lived in a small village and my favourite activity was riding my bike

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. The context is past (When I was a child), so verbs should be in past tense. 'have' should be 'had' and the extra 'I think that I live' is incorrect and redundant; 'lived' matches the past timeframe. Suggestion: Keep all verbs consistent in past tense when describing past events. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country in Russia because it is very healthy to cycling around my city almost in summer because it is very beautiful here.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country, Russia, because it is very healthy to cycle around my city, especially in summer, because it is very beautiful here.

The gerund 'cycling' is incorrectly used after 'to'; after 'to' (infinitive marker) the base form 'cycle' should follow. Also 'almost in summer' is unnatural; 'especially in summer' is more appropriate. Punctuation and commas improve clarity. Suggestion: Use the infinitive 'to cycle' after 'to' and choose clearer adverb 'especially' for frequency/season emphasis. Grammar problem type ID:8