Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tu respuesta no fue clara y contenía palabras ininteligibles. Necesitas contestar directamente con una oración principal y añadir detalles relevantes (por ejemplo, edad, con quién la usabas, qué tipo de bicicleta era). Usa conectores si das más información y limita la respuesta a un máximo de 4-5 oraciones. Practica pronunciación y habla despacio para que tus palabras sean comprensibles.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and I used to ride it to the park with my older brother. It was a small red bike with training wheels at first, and later I learned to ride without them. Riding that bike helped me feel independent and confident.

提案: Tu respuesta fue comprensible pero repetitiva y breve. Debes empezar con una idea clara, luego explicar por qué piensas eso y dar un ejemplo o comparación. Usa conectores como “because”, “for example” o “however” para estructurar la respuesta y evita repetir la misma frase.

例: I don't think bicycles are as popular in my country as they should be because many people prefer cars. For example, cities lack safe bike lanes and public awareness about cycling is low, so fewer people choose bikes for commuting. However, cycling is becoming more common among students and young professionals who want a cheaper and healthier option.

× Tenia Unawik letter Guanera Sono

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original response is unintelligible and does not form a grammatical English sentence. The question asked about possession in the past, so use past tense with the subject and verb: 'I had' + object 'a bike' and time phrase 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: respond in clear, complete sentences using subject + past-tense verb + object and an appropriate time expression.

× Not as much as not that much as they should be

✓ Not as much as they should be.

The original sentence is repetitive and contains unnecessary repetition 'not as much as not that much as'. The question asks about general popularity, so a concise comparative structure is appropriate: 'Not as much as they should be.' This uses a subject 'they' (bikes) and a correct comparative phrase. Suggestion: avoid redundant phrases; keep comparisons concise (e.g., 'not as popular as they should be').