Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不完整且時態使用不正確。應直接回答問題並提供1-2句具體細節，例如何時擁有、誰買的、常騎去哪裡，並使用過去時。回答長度控制在最多5句內，避免冗餘。

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle from the age of seven until I was twelve. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I often rode it to school and to my friend’s house.

提案: 回答簡短且語法和主謂一致有誤（主語複數應用複數動詞）。應用一個主題句加上1-2個具體理由或例子，並使用連接詞使內容連貫。

例: Yes, they are quite popular. Many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and there are also more bike lanes in cities now to encourage cycling.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

这是一个时态问题。考官问的是过去（"when you were a child"），所以应使用过去时回答。原句用现在时的助动词"have"不符合语境。建议把助动词换成过去时的"did"，或用完整句子如"Yes, I did have a bike." 来更清楚地表达过去拥有的事实。

× Yes it's very popular.

✓ Yes, they're very popular.

这是主谓一致错误。题目问的是"bikes"（复数），因此描述时谓语和指代也应为复数。原句用单数代词"it"与复数名词不匹配。建议使用复数代词和动词缩写形式，如"Yes, they're very popular." 或更完整的"Yes, bikes are very popular in my country."