Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the examiner's question and keep to a natural conversational tone. Also use varied vocabulary (e.g., owned, borrowed, learned to ride) and limit to no more than five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I owned a small red bicycle from when I was about six, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. It was especially useful for visiting friends and helped me become more independent.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific reasons or examples. Improve grammar (use articles, plurals, and verb forms) and include concrete details to make the answer more informative and natural. Keep responses concise (up to five sentences).

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and practical for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to go to local markets, especially in smaller towns where traffic is lighter.

× Yes bikes are popular in my country many people have it

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country; many people have them.

The original sentence uses the singular pronoun 'it' to refer to the plural noun 'bikes', which is incorrect. Replace 'it' with the plural pronoun 'them'. Also add appropriate punctuation and a comma after 'Yes' for clarity and to separate clauses. Suggestion: use 'them' for plural reference and include punctuation to join independent clauses correctly.