Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ: khi nào bạn có, ai tặng, tần suất sử dụng). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần (for example, because, so). Giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used it every day after school to ride around the neighborhood. For example, I often rode to the park with my friends because it was a short distance from our homes.

提案: Một lần nữa bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi thay vì trả lời. Trả lời trực tiếp với ý kiến (yes/no or I think...), rồi nêu lí do cụ thể (ví dụ: tiện lợi, giá cả, giao thông, thể thao) và một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'for example' để rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

例: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental services, and many students ride to school to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error rather than a grammatical form error. The correction supplies a proper past-tense declarative answer matching the question's past-time frame. Suggestion: respond with a subject + past-tense verb (I had) and optional details (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.').

× Do you think bikes are popular in the country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Using 'the country' is unnatural here because the question asks about the student's own country; use the possessive adjective 'your' to indicate that. Suggestion: use 'your country' when referring to the listener's nation rather than 'the country.'