Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the grammar and make the answer natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then add one brief supporting detail. Use linking words if you add more than one detail. For example, say whether it was a bicycle or type, and mention how often you used it or a short memory to enrich the answer.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I used it almost every day to ride around the neighborhood.

提案: Improve clarity, grammar and organization. Begin with a clear opinion, then use a linking word (for example, however, but) to introduce a contrasting point. Be specific about who prefers bikes and who prefers motorbikes, and give a brief reason. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

例: I think bicycles used to be more popular when I was young, especially among children and teenagers. However, nowadays many young people in Dubai prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for getting around the city.

× Yes, I have by when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

The original sentence has incorrect verb tense and a typo. The question asks about the past (when I was a child), so the past tense 'had' is required (past tense issue - ID 5). 'have by' is a typo or wrong word order and should be 'had one.' Use 'had' to match the time frame and 'one' as the pronoun for 'a bike.' Suggestion: use past simple for actions or possessions in a finished past time ('I had a bike when I was a child').

× My bias, I think the bias is really popular when I was young, but right now Dubai is not popular for the next generation because they want to ride motorbike.

✓ In my opinion, bicycles were very popular when I was young, but now in Dubai they are less popular with the younger generation because many prefer to ride motorbikes.

This sentence has several problems: incorrect word choice ('bias' should be 'bikes' or 'bicycles'), tense inconsistency ('were' for past popularity and 'now' for present), subject-verb agreement and article/word form issues ('motorbike' should be plural or 'motorbikes' to match 'they'). These map to plural/singular issues (ID 1), past tense issue (ID 5), present tense issue (ID 6), and incorrect use of words/articles (ID 22). Use past simple 'were' to describe past general states, and present simple 'are' or 'are less popular' for current states. Replace 'my bias' with 'In my opinion' or 'I think' and 'bias' with 'bikes' or 'bicycles.' Also use 'motorbikes' or 'motorcycles' to agree with 'they.' Suggestion: keep tenses consistent for each time frame and choose correct nouns and number agreement ('bicycles were', 'they prefer motorbikes').