Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement), simplify and make answer more natural and concise, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Aim for 2–3 sentences, correct verb forms, and remove unnecessary justification about gender unless directly relevant.

例: No, I didn't. When I was little my family didn't allow me to ride a bicycle because they thought it was dangerous, so I only walked or took the bus to school.

提案: Correct word choice and grammar, add a linking word and a specific detail to support the idea. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and use relevant vocabulary like "commute" or "transportation".

例: Yes, definitely. Many young people prefer bicycles for short commutes; for example, students often cycle to college because it's cheap and convenient.

× No I didn't. When I was little my family didn't allowed me to ride a bicycle because they thought it was quite dangerous to riding and I am a female so my parents was extremely conscious about my health issue.

✓ No, I didn't. When I was little my family didn't allow me to ride a bicycle because they thought it was quite dangerous to ride, and I was a girl, so my parents were extremely conscious about my health.

Multiple past-tense errors and related problems: 'didn't allowed' is incorrect because after the auxiliary 'did' the base form 'allow' must be used (Past tense issue). 'to riding' should be 'to ride' because after 'dangerous to' a verb takes the base form with to (Verb + -ing form error if attempted). 'I am a female' should match past context: use past 'I was a girl' (Present tense issue vs Past tense issue). 'my parents was' is subject-verb agreement: plural subject needs 'were' (Subject-verb agreement / Past tense issue). Suggestions: use base verb after did (didn't allow), keep consistent past tense throughout, use 'to ride' after 'dangerous to', and use 'were' for plural past. Break long sentences or use commas to improve clarity.

× Yes, definitely. In my country mostly younger people are really attracted to buys. They use bicycle for transportation during college or school.

✓ Yes, definitely. In my country, mostly younger people are really attracted to bikes. They use bicycles for transportation during college or school.

Word choice and count noun errors: 'attracted to buys' is incorrect — 'buys' is a verb/noun unrelated here; the correct noun is 'bikes' (informal) or 'bicycles' (more formal). Also 'use bicycle' should be 'use bicycles' to match plural subject (Singular and plural issue). Suggestions: use the correct noun 'bikes' or 'bicycles' and ensure plural agreement with 'people' by using 'bicycles'.