Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümle yapısını düzeltmeniz ve soruya doğrudan, geçmiş zamanda cevap vermeniz gerekiyor. Bu soru çocuğunuzun olup olmadığı hakkında değil; sizin çocukken bisikletinizin olup olmadığı hakkında. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından bir veya iki destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (ör. "when", "because") kullanarak cümlelerinizi bağlayın. Örnek: "Evet/Hayır, ... because ..." şeklinde başlayabilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my parents wanted me to exercise outdoors. I rode it to visit friends and to go to the local park almost every weekend, so it became an important part of my childhood.

提案: Cevabınızı tekrar ve dilbilgisi hatalarından arındırarak ve daha spesifik örneklerle güçlendirin. Konu cümlesinde net bir görüş belirtin, sonra bir veya iki destekleyici detay ekleyin; örneğin istatistik, günlük alışkanlıklar veya şehir/şehirler farkı gibi. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın. Örnek: "Yes, ... because ... For example, ..."

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer them for short commutes. For example, in my city most office workers and students ride bicycles to save time and avoid traffic, especially during rush hour.

× Do you have a bike when you have a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student changed the tense and subject incorrectly. The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the correct form is past simple: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' Use 'did' + base verb for past simple questions and 'were' for the past state 'you were a child'. Avoid switching to present tense 'do you have' and 'have a child', which changes the meaning and time-frame. Suggestion: Match the tense to the question asked; use past simple question structure: 'Did + subject + base verb' and past form of 'to be' (were) for past states.

× Yes, I think the bikes are very popular because everybody goes goes to work by bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular because everybody goes to work by bike.

There is a repeated word 'goes' (a typographical/repetition error) and an unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'bikes'. Remove the duplicate 'goes' and do not use 'the' when speaking about bikes in general. Also, 'everybody goes to work by bike' correctly uses third person singular present 'goes'. Suggestion: Eliminate duplicate words and avoid unnecessary articles when referring to things in general; say 'bikes are popular' rather than 'the bikes are popular'.