Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Speak in the past tense and give a clear, direct topic sentence. Avoid repetition and add one or two supporting details (reason or memory) using linking words. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences).

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride to the park. Because our family lived in a crowded city, my parents thought it was unsafe for me to cycle alone.

提案: Give a clear opinion, avoid repeating words, and add specific supporting details or comparisons using linking words. Mention who uses bikes, why they are popular, or where they are common. Keep it natural and concise.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among boys and students. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to school and work because they are affordable and convenient, and in some cities there are dedicated bike lanes which encourages cycling.

× No, I don't have a bike No when I was a child I was I don't have a bike

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student mixes present tense ('don't have') with past-time reference ('when I was a child'). Use the past simple 'didn't have' for negative statements about the past. Also remove filler repetitions to form a complete sentence.

× Yes, bikes are quite bikes are quite popular in our country among boys.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in our country, especially among boys.

The sentence repeats a phrase and is awkward. Use the present simple 'are' for general facts and remove repetition. Add 'especially' or 'among' to clarify the group. Ensure a single clear clause.