Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 语法和时态需要改正，句子结构也不够自然。第一句中“were”应为“was”；第二句中年龄表达不自然，应为“on my seventh birthday”或“when I was seven”。可以用一到两句补充细节，例如描述自行车的颜色或你最喜欢的骑行回忆，使回答更具体。注意不要超过五句话。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my dad bought for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighborhood, and I still remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without the training wheels.

提案: 回答总体清晰且相关，但动词时态和细节可改进。把“We had”改为“We have”以反映现在状况；可以增加一两个具体例子（比如使用场景、优点或数据）并使用连接词使逻辑更连贯。保持最多五句话。

例: Yes, definitely. We have a public bike-sharing system in Taiwan called UBIK, and you can rent bikes at many subway stations and city centers. This makes cycling a convenient and affordable option for short trips, especially during commute hours.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

这是过去时态中的主谓一致错误。句子中的主语是单数第一/第三人称（I/child），助动词/连系动词应使用过去式 was，而不是 were。改正建议：记住动词 be 在过去式中与主语 I 搭配用 was（I was），与复数主语或第二人称 you 搭配用 were（we/they/you were）。

× I still remember my dad bought a new bicycle for me on my seven years old birthday.

✓ I still remember my dad bought a new bicycle for me on my seventh birthday.

句子中关于年龄的表达使用不正确。英文中表示年龄时常用序数词加上“birthday”（seventh birthday），而不是“seven years old birthday”。改正建议：把“seven years old”换成序数词“seventh”；若要说“我七岁生日”用“my seventh birthday”；若要说“我七岁”则用“I was seven”。

× Yes, definitely. We had a public bike sharing system in Taiwan called UBIK. You can rent it almost everywhere.

✓ Yes, definitely. We have a public bike-sharing system in Taiwan called UBIK. You can rent it almost everywhere.

这里时态和词形使用不完全恰当。说到现在仍然存在的系统应使用现在时 have 而不是过去时 had；此外复合名词“bike-sharing”通常用连字符。改正建议：如果系统仍在运行，使用现在时“have”；若强调过去但现在可能不存在，才用“had”。另外使用“bike-sharing”或“bike sharing”都可，但更常见写法是“bike-sharing system”。