Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question rather than answering it. For a better score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and within 3–4 short sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was six, and I rode it almost every day. Because I practiced on our quiet street, I became confident riding without training wheels within a month.

提案: Again, you repeated the examiner's question rather than giving an opinion. To improve, state your opinion directly, then give a specific reason or example using linking words (for example, because, however, in addition). Use relevant vocabulary like commuter, cycling lanes, or popular among students.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, students and office workers often cycle on dedicated bike lanes in the city, although car ownership is still common in suburban areas.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

This sentence omits the definite article 'a' before the noun 'child'. In English, when referring to a singular countable noun in this context, the indefinite article 'a' is required. Use 'a child' to indicate one member of the category 'child'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles with singular countable nouns (e.g., 'a child', 'an apple').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. The plural noun 'bikes' correctly agrees with the plural predication 'are popular', and the question form and word order are appropriate. No change needed.