Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your reply did not answer the examiner’s question and is grammatically incorrect. For Part 1 you must respond directly with a clear topic sentence about yourself (yes/no or brief statement), then add one or two supporting details using simple linking words. Also correct word order: say “Did you have a bike when you were a child?” not “with your child.” Keep answers natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

例: Yes — I did have a bike when I was a child. I remember receiving it as a gift from my parents and practicing in the park near our house. Because the streets were quiet, I learned to ride quickly and felt very independent.

提案: The reply repeats the question and uses incorrect wording, so it fails to provide an opinion or supporting details. You should state your opinion clearly (e.g. “Yes, they are popular” or “No, not really”), then give one or two specific reasons and use a linking word (because, however, therefore). Avoid unnatural phrasing like “above that.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and shops selling bicycles have become more common in recent years.

× Did you have a bike with your child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the preposition 'with' incorrectly. The examiner's question asks about possession during the student's childhood, which requires the time-related phrase 'when you were a child.' Replace 'with your child' with 'when you were a child' to indicate the correct time reference. Suggestion: use 'when' for time periods and avoid 'with' which implies accompaniment, not time.

× Do you think bikes are above that in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The phrase 'above that' is an incorrect and unclear use of preposition and demonstrative reference. The examiner asked about popularity; the correct adjective is 'popular.' Replace 'are above that' with 'are popular' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: choose adjectives that match the question context and avoid vague prepositional phrases like 'above that.'