Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevaplarınız açık fakat daha doğal ve akıcı olmaya ihtiyacı var. İlk cümleniz doğrudan soruyu yanıtlıyor; ancak destekleyici cümlelerde daha spesifik detaylar (ör. kaç yaşında, nerede sürerdiniz, neden sevdiğinizi) vermeniz ve bağlaçlar kullanmanız konuşmanızı zenginleştirir. Ayrıca son cümlenizde kısa bir açıklama ekleyerek bağ kurabilirsiniz (ör. tamir ettirmedim çünkü...). Örnek: 3-4 cümleyle, bağlaçlarla ve özgün detaylarla cevap verin, maksimum 5 cümleyi aşmayın.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I started riding it at about seven and used to cycle to my friend’s house every weekend. I loved the freedom it gave me because I could explore my neighborhood. However, I still own that bike now and it doesn’t work, so I haven’t used it for years.

提案: Cümlenizde kelime hataları ve mantık akışı sorunları var; 'banks' yerine 'bikes' demeniz gerekirdi ve 'have cars instead of bikes' gibi daha doğru bir yapı kullanmalısınız. Cevabınızı doğrudan verip sonra nedenlerini mantıklı bağlaçlarla açıklayın (ör. because, so, therefore). Ayrıca somut örnekler veya karşılaştırmalar ekleyin (şehir merkezinde durum farklı olabilir). Maksimum 5 cümle kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most families prefer cars because they are more convenient for long distances and carrying shopping. In big cities, however, cycling is becoming more common due to traffic and bike lanes. Therefore, bike use varies depending on where people live.

× 'I don't think banks are popular in my country.'

✓ 'I don't think bikes are popular in my country.'

'The student used the pronoun/word "banks" instead of "bikes", which is likely a typographical or word-choice error. Replace with the correct noun "bikes" to match the examiner's question about bicycles. Suggestion: read the sentence aloud and check that the word matches the intended meaning and context.'

× 'People have cars inside of bikes.'

✓ 'People have cars instead of bikes.'

'The phrase "inside of" is incorrect in this context. The intended contrast is between cars and bikes, which is expressed with "instead of". Also "inside of bikes" is illogical. Suggestion: use "instead of" to show contrast between two options.'

× 'That's why people go to somewhere by car.'

✓ 'That's why people go somewhere by car.'

'The phrase "go to somewhere" is incorrect; the verb "go" combines directly with "somewhere" without "to". Remove "to" for correct sentence structure. Suggestion: use "go somewhere" or specify a destination: "go to the city by car."' }]}