Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct the vocabulary mistake (pike → bike) and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences. For example, mention where you rode, with whom, or a memorable moment to add interest.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends, and we would race to the park every afternoon. It was my main way to explore and feel independent.

提案: Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing (e.g., “COVID nineteen”, “pause and reflect and reflect with nature”). Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons or an example, using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Keep the answer concise and natural-sounding.

例: Yes, bikes became more popular in my country during the COVID-19 pandemic because people wanted outdoor exercise and safer, socially distanced travel. For example, many families started weekend cycling trips and local bike shops reported higher sales.

× Yes, I had a pike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original contains a typo 'pike' which is a singular noun meaning a spear; context indicates 'bike' (bicycle). This is not a grammar category in the list but is best treated as a singular noun error. Replace 'pike' with 'bike' to match the intended meaning and maintain singular form. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I used it to roam around the neighborhood and play with my friends.

✓ I used it to roam around the neighborhood and to play with my friends.

The sentence uses 'used to' meaning habitual past; 'used it to roam' is acceptable but parallel structure is improved by adding 'to' before the second verb. This ensures balanced infinitive verbs. This falls under improper verb form/parallelism which aligns with present participle/past participle categories; here adding 'to' corrects the structure. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× Bikes are occasionally popular in my country, especially during the COVID nineteen pandemic where everyone had to pause and reflect and reflect with nature.

✓ Bikes became more popular in my country, especially during the COVID-19 pandemic when everyone had to pause and reflect and reconnect with nature.

The original mixes present tense 'are occasionally popular' with reference to a past period 'pandemic.' Use past tense 'became' to match timing. Also 'COVID nineteen' should be written 'COVID-19' and 'where' is better as 'when' for time. The repetition 'reflect and reflect' is redundant; 'reconnect with nature' expresses intended meaning. This corrects tense consistency and wording. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× That was the time when it brought back its popularity, I guess.

✓ That was when it regained its popularity, I guess.

'It brought back its popularity' is awkward and uses a causative sense incorrectly; 'regained its popularity' is the correct past passive/active expression. Also 'That was the time when' is wordy; 'That was when' is more natural. This corrects verb choice and phrase structure. Grammar problem type ID: 9