Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, concise answer (1–2 sentences) with at most 5 sentences total. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief detail), then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (for example, because / so / and).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I often rode it to the park after school because my parents wanted me to get fresh air.

提案: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. Provide a direct opinion sentence (Yes/No/Somewhat) and then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / however / therefore). Keep answers natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. However, they are more common in cities with dedicated bike lanes, while in rural areas cars are still the main mode of transport.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Original 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is a question repeated by the student instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the student should provide a statement answer, not repeat the question. Correction changes the question form to a past simple affirmative 'I had' to match the past-tense question. Suggestion: Answer questions directly using the appropriate tense (here past simple) and subject-verb form: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. This is a present tense usage/context issue (ID 6) because the response should be a present-tense statement. Correction uses present simple 'I think' and repeats the complement 'bikes are popular in my country' to form a proper answer. Suggestion: When asked for opinion in present tense, reply with a present simple clause: 'I think...' or 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.'