Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp rồi mở rộng ngắn gọn, sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ, và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng như “Yes, I did” hoặc “No, I didn’t”. (2) Nói thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ai tặng, loại xe, tần suất sử dụng) dùng thì và cấu trúc đúng. (3) Tránh câu dài lủng củng và dùng từ phù hợp (ví dụ: energetic mô tả người, không phải hành động). Ví dụ cần dưới 5 câu, tự nhiên và có liên từ như “because” hoặc “so”.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven. I rode it almost every day after school because it was a quick and fun way to visit my friends. I was very active, so cycling became my favorite hobby.

提案: Cần trả lời rõ ràng (Yes/No) rồi giải thích bằng lý do cụ thể và mạch lạc. Sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: ‘Vietnamese people usually use motorbikes’) và tránh lặp từ. Dùng liên từ như “because”, “however” để kết nối ý, và đưa ví dụ hoặc so sánh cụ thể (thành phố vs nông thôn). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

例: I think bikes are not very popular in my country. Most people prefer motorbikes or cars because they are faster and more convenient for long distances. However, bicycles are more common in rural areas and among people who want to exercise or protect the environment.

× When I wore a chest.

✓ When I was a child.

The student used incorrect vocabulary and structure; 'wore a chest' is meaningless. Use the fixed expression 'when I was a child' to indicate past time. Suggestion: learn common time expressions (when I was a child/when I was young) and use 'was' for past state of the subject.

× I am a energetic boy.

✓ I am an energetic boy.

Before a vowel sound use the indefinite article 'an' instead of 'a'. Also 'energetic' is an adjective modifying 'boy'. Suggestion: check the first sound of the following word to choose 'a' or 'an'.

× I have many hobbies.

✓ I have many hobbies.

This sentence is grammatically correct; 'many' correctly modifies the plural noun 'hobbies'. No change needed.

× The best and the most hobby is riding bike by the energetic.

✓ My favourite hobby is riding a bike because I am energetic.

Original sentence mixes incorrect phrases ('the best and the most hobby', 'riding bike by the energetic') and wrong word order. Use 'favourite hobby' or 'the best hobby' and include the article 'a' before 'bike'. Use a reason clause 'because I am energetic'. Suggestion: keep subject + linking verb + complement structure and place reasons after 'because'.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This is correct as written; present simple is appropriate to ask about general truth or opinion. No change needed.

× No, I think so, because Vietnamese Vietnamese people should be to the transportation by motorbike, car and electric or the mountain transportation they choose for greener environments.

✓ No, I don't think so, because Vietnamese people usually choose motorbikes, cars, or electric vehicles for transportation, although some prefer cycling for a greener environment.

Multiple problems: 'I think so' contradicted by 'No' so change to 'I don't think so'. Remove duplicated 'Vietnamese'. 'Should be to the transportation' is incorrect — use 'choose' or 'use' for modes of transport. 'Electric' needs a noun ('electric vehicles'). 'Mountain transportation' is unclear; likely meant 'cycling' or 'bicycles'. Rephrase to parallel lists and add 'usually' for habit. Suggestion: simplify sentence into clear clauses: opinion + reason, use correct verbs (choose/use), correct nouns (electric vehicles/bicycles), and avoid duplication.