Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a brief topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (what kind of bike, how often you rode it, a memorable experience) using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise, within 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six. For example, I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my older brother, and I remember learning to balance without the training wheels one summer, which made me very proud.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons or examples and use a linking word to connect ideas (e.g., because, for example, therefore). Avoid vague absolutes like “everywhere” unless you give context.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing stations, so you often see cyclists during rush hour and on weekends.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence 'Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.' is grammatically acceptable in casual speech, but in response to a simple past question the natural and concise form is 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' This removes the unnecessary emphatic auxiliary 'did.' Suggestion: use the simple past form for plain affirmative answers rather than 'did' + base verb unless you want emphasis.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present simple tense for a general statement. No change needed.

× In fact, everywhere I go there are a lot of cyclists.

✓ In fact, wherever I go, there are a lot of cyclists.

The original sentence is understandable and not strictly incorrect, but 'everywhere I go' is acceptable; however, 'wherever I go' is a more natural conjunction phrase for this context. Also adding a comma after the introductory clause improves readability. Suggestion: use 'wherever I go' and include a comma after the introductory phrase for smoother flow.