Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is correct but too short. Give a brief topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, when you used it, or a memory) using a linking word to make it coherent. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I used to ride it to a nearby park almost every afternoon. It was how I learned balance and made friends in the neighborhood.

提案: Your answer repeats phrases and is unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then add a specific reason or example with a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'for instance'). Avoid repetition and aim for 2–3 coherent sentences.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, my friends and I ride our bikes together every morning to stay fit and avoid traffic.

× Yes, I think that I think bikes I think me and my group ride it every morning

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular. My friends and I ride them every morning.

This sentence has multiple issues: repetition ('I think' three times) and incorrect sentence structure and pronoun and verb agreement. The phrase 'me and my group ride it every morning' has incorrect subject order, should be 'My friends and I' (subject pronoun and polite order) and 'ride it' uses singular object 'it' while 'bikes' is plural, so use 'them'. Also the response to the question about popularity should be a clear statement, so split into two sentences: one addressing popularity in general ('Yes, I think bikes are popular') and one describing personal habit in the present simple ('My friends and I ride them every morning'), which matches the habitual present tense.