Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response shows a misunderstanding: you repeated the question incorrectly and did not answer. Improve by first answering directly (e.g., “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t”), then add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

例: Yes, I did. I got a small red bicycle when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in the park near my house. Because my parents lived close to my school, I often rode my bike there with friends.

提案: You again echoed the examiner instead of answering; also you changed the meaning (“biker” vs “bikes”). Focus on answering the original question about bikes. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons or examples, linked with words like “because” or “for example.” Keep within five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in my city there are bike lanes and several bike-sharing schemes, so lots of commuters and students ride bikes daily.

× Did you have a voice when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'voice' instead of 'bike', which is a lexical error rather than a grammatical one, but it creates a singular/plural and noun selection problem. The question asks about possession of a bicycle in childhood; the correct noun is 'bike'. Suggestion: pay attention to the examiner's word 'bike' and practice distinguishing similar-sounding words to avoid incorrect noun choice.

× Do you think biker are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikers are popular in your country?

The noun 'biker' is singular while the verb 'are' requires a plural subject. Use the plural noun 'bikers' to match the plural verb 'are' and the intended meaning asking about people who ride bikes in general. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb number agree; for general groups use plural nouns (bikers) with 'are'.