Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Write a direct, grammatically correct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct verb tenses and articles (e.g., 'I never had my own bike' and 'I have ridden public bikes'). Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

例: No, I never had my own bike as a child. However, I sometimes rode shared public bikes called YouBike, which I used mainly to go to the park on weekends.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., 'Yes, bikes are quite popular'). Use a linking word to introduce a reason (e.g., 'because' or 'so') and give one specific detail about students and regulations. Correct grammar and word order (e.g., 'for us students' and 'ride motorcycles'). Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel. For students in particular, bicycles are common since many are not allowed to ride motorcycles or drive cars yet.

× No, I never have my own bike.

✓ No, I never had my own bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood (past time), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Have' in simple present is incorrect here; use 'had' to match the past context. Suggestion: use simple past for states in the past ('I never had').

× I have actually ride a bike by the public bicycle called you bike.

✓ I actually rode a bike using a public bicycle scheme called YouBike.

Multiple errors: the present perfect 'have' combined with base verb 'ride' is incorrect; the past tense of 'ride' is 'rode'. Also preposition and noun choices are incorrect: use 'using' or 'on' and 'public bicycle scheme' or 'public bike service'. Proper nouns like 'YouBike' should be capitalized and written as one word. Suggestion: use simple past 'I rode' and clearer phrasing 'using a public bicycle scheme called YouBike.'

× I think it's quite popular, especially for us as a student, it's more convenient to go from go to school by bike as we can't ride motorcycle or drive a car.

✓ I think it's quite popular, especially for us as students; it's more convenient to go to school by bike since we can't ride motorcycles or drive cars.

Several issues: 'as a student' should be plural to match 'us' so use 'as students' (pronoun agreement). Remove duplicate 'go'. Use 'go to school' instead of 'go from go to school'. Use 'since' or 'because' for reason. 'Ride motorcycle' needs plural 'motorcycles' and 'drive a car' should be plural 'drive cars' to match general statement. Also punctuation improved by splitting clauses. Suggestion: ensure noun/pronoun agreement, remove repeated words, and pluralize general nouns when making general statements ('motorcycles', 'cars').