Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法与措辞错误。需要直接回应问题并用一到两句补充具体原因。避免重复（如多次说“mom”与“bike”），并改进时态与表达，例如用“I didn't have a bike because my mother was worried I might fall, so she didn't let me learn to ride.” 可练习用连接词（so / because / therefore）使句子更连贯。

例: I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my mother was worried I might fall, so she didn't let me learn to ride. As a result, I only started cycling much later when I felt more confident and safe.

提案: 回答内容方向正确但未完成且有语法错误。应先直接回答（Yes, they are popular），然后用一两句具体说明原因和例子，注意主谓一致（‘students’而非‘every students’）并完成句子。添加连接词（especially / because / so）以增强连贯性。

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in China, especially among middle school students. Many students buy bikes to commute to school because they are cheap and convenient, although some parents worry about safety and prefer their children to travel by bus.

× No one. I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't.

语病/句子结构错误。原句“No one. I was a child.”不符合上下文题意。面试官问“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”学生想表达“没有”，应直接回答“No, I didn't.”或“No, I didn't have one.”建议在回答Yes/No问题时用完整简短回答，保持句子与所问时态一致。

× I didn't have a bike because my mom was afraid of falling down.

✓ I didn't have a bike because my mom was afraid I would fall down.

句子结构和从句表达问题。原句“my mom was afraid of falling down”暗指“妈妈害怕自己摔倒”，而要表达“妈妈担心我摔倒”应使用不定式结构或从句："afraid I would fall down"或"afraid that I would fall down"。建议使用明确主语的从句来表达担忧对象。

× So my mom didn't allow me to know how to ride the bicycle, so I didn't have the bike.

✓ So my mom didn't allow me to learn how to ride a bicycle, so I didn't have one.

错误使用动词短语。原句“allow me to know how to ride”不自然，正确表达是“allow me to learn how to ride”或“teach me to ride”。此外“the bike”应改为不定冠词或代词“a bicycle”/“one”。建议使用固定搭配“learn how to ride”或“teach me to ride”。

× Riding a bicycle is very popular in China especially in middle school.

✓ Riding bicycles is very popular in China, especially among middle school students.

主谓搭配和名词单复数及介词使用问题。原句用单数“a bicycle”与泛指习惯不符，且“in middle school”更自然为“among middle school students”。建议将泛指改为复数形式并用恰当介词短语。

× Every students wanted to have a bicycle.

✓ Every student wanted to have a bicycle.

单复数错误。“Every”后应接单数名词，所以应为“every student”，而不是“every students”。建议记住“every + 单数名词”。

× So their parents, sometimes their parents were worried about whether they would

✓ So sometimes their parents were worried about whether they would be safe.

句子不完整且结构混乱。原句重复“their parents”且缺少句尾内容。需要补全从句使句意完整，例如“worried about whether they would be safe”或“worried about whether they would fall off”。建议避免重复并完整表达从句内容。