Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Directly answer the question, use correct grammar and a topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use past tense and linkers if giving extra details.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I rode it around my neighborhood every day. Because my parents wanted me to exercise and learn balance, they encouraged me to practice after school and on weekends.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct phrasing (e.g., “popular in my country”) and linking words (for example, because, so) to make your answer coherent and slightly more detailed, while keeping it concise.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bikes to commute in cities because it is cheap and avoids traffic, and schools often encourage students to cycle for short trips.

× What's on my? Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did I have a bike when I was a child?

The student attempted to repeat the examiner's question but used incorrect question form and pronoun. The correct past simple question for oneself uses 'Did' + subject + base verb: 'Did I have...?' 'What's on my?' is ungrammatical and mixes forms. Use 'Did I have a bike when I was a child?' to match past tense. Suggestion: Remember to form past simple questions with 'Did' + subject + base verb and use the correct subject pronoun (I).

× Yes, bike is popular to our country, in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

There are multiple errors: noun number and article ('bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally, or 'the bike' with article for specific), verb agreement (with plural 'bikes' use 'are'), and preposition ('popular in our country' is correct; 'popular to' is incorrect). The corrected sentence uses plural noun and matching verb: 'bikes are', and the correct preposition 'in'. Suggestion: Use plural when speaking about things generally (bikes), ensure subject-verb agreement, and use 'in' for locations (in our country).