Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be grammatically accurate, expand slightly with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use past tense for past experiences, avoid very short answers, and keep within 1–3 sentences. Add a linking word if you include more than one idea.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, and I rode it to visit friends in my neighborhood every weekend.

提案: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense consistently, and correct noun forms (transport tool → means of transport; sport tool → for sport). Use a linking word to contrast past and present. Provide one specific example or brief reason to support your view.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular. In the past they were a common means of transport for daily travel, whereas now they are used more for exercise and leisure, for example many people cycle in parks or join cycling clubs at weekends.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student's reply 'Yes, I have.' uses present perfect, which is incorrect here. Use the simple past 'did' to match the past context: 'Yes, I did.' This ensures tense consistency. If giving additional info, use past tense: 'Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was about six.'

× So I think it's very popular in our, it was very popular in our country as a transport tools, but now it's more a sport tools in our country.

✓ So I think it was very popular in our country as a means of transport, but now it is more of a sport in our country.

This sentence has multiple errors falling under subject-verb agreement, article use, countable/plural word choice, and word order. 'It was very popular in our country' uses 'it' awkwardly; better to use 'it was' referring to bikes. 'Transport tools' is incorrect: use 'a means of transport' or 'transport' (uncountable). 'Sport tools' is wrong: bikes are 'used more for sport' or 'more as a sport' and 'tools' is unnecessary. Also use consistent past/present forms: 'was very popular' (past) and 'now it is more of a sport' (present). Suggested improvements: choose correct noun forms (means of transport, sport), ensure singular/plural match, and maintain clear subject references.