Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Speak in the past tense consistently, give a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words if you add details (for example, 'and' or 'which'). Keep your answer natural and within 1–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. It was a simple steel frame with a basket, which made it easy to carry my schoolbooks.

提案: Use correct subject-verb agreement and appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'bicycles are' not 'bicycle become'). Start with a clear opinion, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid word repetition and awkward verbs such as 'drive' for bicycles—use 'ride'.

例: Yes, bicycles are becoming increasingly popular in my country because they are affordable and good for short trips. For example, many people now cycle to work or school, and cities are adding bike lanes to make riding safer.

× When I was a child, I have a blue bike. A blue bike? A blue bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a blue bike. A blue bike? Yes, a blue bike.

The sentence begins with a past-time phrase 'When I was a child', so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Have' is present tense; the correct past form is 'had'. Also the repetition 'A blue bike? A blue bike.' is awkward in spoken repair; adding a short confirmation 'Yes, a blue bike.' makes it natural. Suggestion: Use the past tense ('had') after time expressions referring to the past; when repeating for confirmation, add a confirming word (yes) or restructure the repetition.

× Bicycle become popular in my country everywhere and every passing passing day and I tend to drive a ride bicycle.

✓ Bicycles are becoming more popular in my country every day, and I tend to ride a bicycle.

There are multiple errors governed by present tense and form. 'Bicycle become' is incorrect: for general present progressive change, use 'Bicycles are becoming' (present continuous) and plural 'bicycles' for general statement. 'Every passing passing day' repeats a word; use 'every day' or 'with each passing day'. 'I tend to drive a ride bicycle' mixes verbs: 'drive' is used for cars and conflicts with 'ride'; the correct collocation for bikes is 'ride a bicycle'. Also use 'ride' not 'a ride'. Suggestion: Use 'are becoming' for ongoing change, pluralize general subjects, avoid repeated words, and use correct verb collocations (ride a bicycle).