Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Répondez de manière plus développée et naturelle. Donnez une phrase de sujet claire, puis ajoutez 1–2 détails concrets (par ex. qui utilisait le vélo, à quel âge, où vous alliez) en utilisant un mot de liaison si nécessaire. Évitez les réponses monosyllabiques et respectez la limite maximale d'environ 3–5 phrases.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my eighth birthday and used it to ride to school and the nearby park every day. Because the roads near my home were quiet, I felt safe practicing tricks with my friends.

提案: Donnez une réponse directe à la question et développez avec des raisons spécifiques. Commencez par une phrase claire (oui/non/it depends), puis expliquez avec 1–2 détails (par exemple: zones urbaines vs rurales, infrastructure, usage pour loisirs ou transport) en utilisant des mots de liaison pour la cohérence.

例: I think bikes are fairly popular in some parts of Algeria, especially in smaller towns and among young people. However, in big cities many people prefer cars or public transport because bike lanes are limited, so usage depends on the area.

× Oh Algeria.

✓ Oh, in Algeria.

The original reply omits the preposition needed to indicate location. When answering "Do you think bikes are popular in your country?" the speaker should express that they are referring to Algeria as their country by using a preposition such as 'in'. Adding 'in' creates a grammatically complete prepositional phrase. Suggestion: use 'in Algeria' or a full sentence like 'Yes, in Algeria they are.' or 'Yes, bikes are popular in Algeria.'