Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly with a clear simple past statement, correct grammar, and a brief specific detail. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid irrelevant or contradictory information. Use linking words if adding details (for example: “because” or “so”).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I couldn’t afford one and my parents thought I was too young to ride, so I usually walked or used public transport.

提案: Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example: “because” or “so”). Use accurate vocabulary (“bikes” not “baggage”) and correct grammar and sentence structure. Keep responses concise (2–3 sentences) and give a concrete example or comparison if helpful.

例: Yes, bikes and scooters are very common in my country because they are cheaper and easier to park than cars. For example, many families use a scooter for daily travel to work or school because owning a car is too expensive.

× No, I doesn't have bike in my childhood because I am a minor.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood because I was a minor.

Errors: 'doesn't have' is present tense and incorrect for 'I' and for past context; 'have' lacks article 'a'; 'am a minor' should be past 'was a minor' to match 'childhood'. Use past simple 'did not have' (didn't have) for past events and include the article 'a' before 'bike'. Also change 'am' to 'was' to keep past time consistent. Suggestions: Use past simple for past situations (didn't have), include articles (a bike), and keep tense consistent (was a minor).

× It's at that time and I can drive bike also.

✓ At that time I could also ride a bike.

Errors: 'It's at that time' is awkward and mixes present 'it is' with past context; 'can drive bike' uses present ability and wrong verb 'drive' for bikes; missing article 'a'. Use 'could' for past ability and 'ride' for bicycles. Also place 'also' appropriately. Suggestions: Keep tense consistent (past), use correct verb 'ride', include articles, and order adverb 'also' before the verb phrase or after modal ('could also ride').

× Yes of course baggage mostly popular in my country.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are mostly popular in my country.

Errors: 'baggage' is incorrect word choice; should be 'bikes' or 'motorbikes'. Missing verb 'are' and incorrect word order. Use 'mostly popular' as 'mostly popular' after 'are' or better 'are very popular'. Suggestions: Use correct noun (bikes), include verb 'are', and use natural word order: 'bikes are mostly popular' or 'bikes are very popular'.

× Mostly parents are bike, scooter because my country is poor no one have that much money to offer to car that that was mostly people have bike or scooter.

✓ Mostly parents use bikes and scooters because my country is poor; no one has enough money to buy a car, so most people have a bike or scooter.

Errors: Sentence is run-on and ungrammatical. 'Parents are bike, scooter' is incorrect — parents 'use' or 'ride' bikes and scooters. 'No one have' is subject-verb agreement error (should be 'has'). 'Offer to car' is wrong verb and preposition; use 'buy a car'. Repetition and awkward phrasing present. Suggestions: Split into clearer clauses, fix subject-verb agreement (no one has), use correct verbs and prepositions ('use/ride', 'buy a car'), and replace 'mostly people' with 'most people'.