Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dasar dan kosakata yang keliru; jawab langsung lalu beri detail pendukung singkat dan koheren. Contoh perbaikan spesifik: gunakan bentuk negatif yang benar (‘I didn't have a bike’), kata benda yang tepat (‘parents’ bukan ‘parent’), dan ungkapkan alasan secara jelas dan ringkas. Jaga panjang jawaban maksimal 3–4 kalimat, gunakan kata penghubung sederhana seperti ‘so’ atau ‘because’.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous. Instead, I usually walked to the supermarket or the park with my friends, which I enjoyed because we could chat and play on the way.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa jamak dan kosakata yang tidak tepat; jawab langsung dan berikan contoh spesifik serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk koherensi. Contoh perbaikan: gunakan ‘bikes are’ bukan ‘bike are’, gunakan ‘errands’ bukan ‘events’ jika maksudnya tugas sehari-hari, dan hindari kata yang salah makna seperti ‘cowards’ (mungkin maksudnya ‘commuters’).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and run daily errands. They are cheap and convenient, especially in congested cities with heavy traffic, so students, office workers and many commuters prefer them.

× No, I didn't on a bike as a child because my parent considered the business was too dangerous.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike as a child because my parents considered it too dangerous.

The verb phrase 'didn't on a bike' is incorrect; use 'didn't have' for possession in the past simple. 'Parent' should be plural 'parents' to match typical meaning, and 'the business' is wrong context; replace with 'it' to refer to riding a bike. Also remove the extra clause structure 'considered the business was' and use 'considered it too dangerous' for clarity.

× Instead I would usually walk to the supermarket or the park with my friends, which I enjoyed because we cold chat and PL. play on the way.

✓ Instead I would usually walk to the supermarket or the park with my friends, which I enjoyed because we could chat and play on the way.

The modal 'would' is acceptable for habitual past, but 'cold' is a typo and should be 'could'. 'PL. play' appears as an editing mark; replace with 'play'. Ensure verbs 'could chat and play' are correct forms. The rest fits the past habitual context.

× Yes, bike are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and to run daily events.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and to run daily errands.

Subject 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to agree with plural verb 'are'. 'Daily events' is unnatural here; 'daily errands' is the correct collocation for routine tasks.

× They are cheap and convenient, especially in congested city with heavy traffic, so students, official workers and even cowards often prefer them.

✓ They are cheap and convenient, especially in congested cities with heavy traffic, so students, office workers and even couriers often prefer them.

Use plural 'cities' after 'in congested' because it's general. 'Official workers' is incorrect; likely meant 'office workers'. 'Cowards' is wrong word (means easily frightened); replace with 'couriers' if referring to delivery riders. Adjust nouns to correct, meaningful terms.