Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümle yapısını ve zaman uyumunu düzeltmelisiniz. Geçmişte sahip olunan bir şeyden bahsederken past simple kullanın (I had). Sahiplik için doğru sıralama ve iyelik eki kullanımı (it belonged to my brother) ile fiil formlarına dikkat edin. Ayrıca yineleme ve gereksiz kelime tekrarından kaçının; ‘cycling’ yerine uygun fiil formlarını (cycle / cycling) doğru yerde kullanın. Cevabınızı 2–4 cümleyle tutun: bir konu cümlesi (evet/hayır + kısa açıklama) ve 1–2 destekleyici detay. Bağlaçlarla akışı sağlayın (for example, because).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but it actually belonged to my brother. I used to ride it often around our neighbourhood, and I still enjoy cycling now because it relaxes me and keeps me fit.

提案: Çift olumsuzdan kaçının: “I don't think the bikes are not popular” ifadedeki iki olumsuz kafa karıştırır; bunun yerine “I don't think bikes are popular” veya “I think bikes are not popular” kullanın. Daha açık ve özgül nedenler verin (örneğin altyapı, hava koşulları, kültür). Cümleleri daha doğal hale getirmek için basit bağlaçlar kullanın (because, so, therefore). Cümle sayısını 2–3’te tutun: görüş + neden/example. Ayrıca dilbilgisi (people drive their cars, go to work) ve kelime sırası düzeltmelerine dikkat edin.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer to drive cars to work. For example, there are few bike lanes and long distances make cycling impractical for daily commuting.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and actually this is not mine, this is belongs to my brother.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. Actually, it was not mine; it belonged to my brother.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Use past tense for a past situation: 'had' instead of 'have', 'was' instead of 'is' and past form 'belonged' instead of 'belongs'. Also replace 'this' with 'it' for correct reference and remove the extra 'this'. Improve punctuation by splitting into two sentences. Suggestion: Keep all verbs in the past when talking about childhood (I had, it belonged).

× But now I usually cycling and I really like to cycling.

✓ But now I usually cycle and I really like cycling.

The verb 'cycle' should be in base form after the adverb 'usually' (use 'usually cycle'), and after 'like' use the gerund 'cycling' not 'to cycling'. Remove the extra 'to'. Suggestion: Use 'usually' + base verb for habitual actions and 'like' + gerund for activities you enjoy (I usually cycle; I like cycling).

× No, I don't think the bikes are not popular in my country because everybody driving their cars to go to do their works.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because everybody drives their cars to go to work.

The original has a double negative ('don't think' + 'not popular') which reverses meaning. Remove 'not'. Also 'the bikes' is unnecessary; use 'bikes' generally. Use third person singular verb 'drives' for 'everybody'. The phrase 'to go to do their works' is ungrammatical; use 'to go to work'. Suggestion: Avoid double negatives; match subject-verb agreement (everybody drives) and use natural collocations ('go to work').

× So bikes are not really significant factor in.

✓ So bikes are not a very significant factor in transportation.

The sentence lacks an article before 'significant factor' and ends abruptly with 'in'. Add 'a' before 'very significant factor' and complete the phrase with 'in transportation' to clarify the context. Suggestion: Ensure complete noun phrases and finish prepositional phrases (a significant factor in transportation).