Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For full credit, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep your answer natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and include specific information (e.g., age, type of bike, who taught you).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about seven, and it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I learned to ride it in my neighborhood with my older brother’s help, and I rode it almost every day after school.

提案: You again repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an opinion. To improve, start with a direct answer (Yes/No/Partly), then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, however, therefore). Use relevant vocabulary (commuting, cycling culture, infrastructure).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because public transport can be crowded, and there are dedicated bike lanes in several urban areas.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's original reply repeated the examiner's question rather than answering it. This is a sentence structure/use issue: the response should be a declarative past-tense sentence. Use past simple 'had' to match the question 'Did you have...'. Provide a complete sentence with subject 'I' and verb 'had' to form a proper answer. Suggestion: Answer with a past simple declarative sentence (e.g. 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of providing a declarative answer. This is a present tense response issue: use present simple 'I think' to state an opinion. Include a subject 'I' and the verb 'think' to make a proper sentence. Suggestion: Answer with a present simple declarative sentence (e.g. 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.').