Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is correct but too brief and lacks natural flow. To improve, start with a direct topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (reason, memory, or consequence). Use a linking word if you provide extra information. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use slightly more natural phrasing (e.g., contractions).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought it wasn’t safe to ride near our building, so they bought me a scooter instead. As a result, I only learned to cycle much later when I was a teenager.

提案: Your response answers the question and gives a reason, but the sentence has a grammar error and could be more specific. Improve by using correct subject-verb agreement, adding a linking word, and providing one concrete example or comparison. Keep it natural and concise (2–4 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many families keep a bicycle for children to go to school, and in cities people often choose bikes over cars to avoid traffic and parking problems.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country as almost every family have at least one bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country as almost every family has at least one bike.

The subject 'every family' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' not 'have'. Use singular verb forms with singular indefinite expressions like 'every'. Suggestion: match the verb to the singular subject (every + singular noun -> singular verb). Also ensure consistency of number between subject and verb.