Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and tense consistency, provide a direct topic sentence and a brief reason or detail. Use past tense for past situations, avoid redundancy, and keep it within 1–3 sentences. Add a linking word if you give extra detail.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived far from bike shops.

提案: Make the response more natural and specific: start with a clear topic sentence, then add a supporting detail or example using a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example"). Use plural forms and natural collocations ("use them for daily activities"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and shopkeepers often ride bikes to save money and avoid traffic.

× No, I don't have bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time 'when I was a child'; use past simple 'didn't have'. Also 'bike' needs the article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and include articles for singular countable nouns (didn't have a bike).

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. Like we use it on day-to-day activities.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. For example, we use them for day-to-day activities.

The fragment 'Like we use it on day-to-day activities' is informal and has pronoun and preposition errors. 'Like' as a sentence starter is informal; use 'For example'. 'Bike' is plural earlier ('bikes'), so the pronoun should be 'them', not 'it'. Use the preposition 'for' with 'activities'. Suggestion: say 'For example, we use them for day-to-day activities.'