Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: أولاً، إجابتك غير ملائمة من حيث القواعد والمضمون. يجب أن ترد على السؤال بصيغة ماضية لأن السؤال عن الماضي. استخدم جملة موضوع مباشرة قصيرة ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة إن لزم الأمر. مثلاً قل "No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child" ثم أذكر سبباً أو شيئاً تذكره، واستخدم رابط مثل "because" أو "so" لربط الجمل. حاول أن تبقى ضمن 2–4 جمل وتجنب الأخطاء في الأزمنة والضمائر.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. Instead, I walked to school or used public transport, which meant I didn’t learn to ride until I was a teenager.

提案: إجابتك غير مفهومة وغير مرتبطة بالسؤال. يجب أن ترد برأيك باستخدام جملة موضوع واضحة، ثم تبرر رأيك بتفاصيل محددة مع وصلات منطقية مثل "because" أو "for example". استخدم مفردات مناسبة للسياق مثل "popular, common, widely used, cycling" وتجنب كلمات لا معنى لها في السياق. حافظ على طول الإجابة حتى 3–4 جمل.

例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, cities have built more bike lanes and bicycle-sharing schemes, so more commuters are choosing cycling over driving.

× No, I'm not.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked a past simple question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The student used 'I'm not' which is present continuous and uses a pronoun with 'to be', and does not answer the past possession question. Use the auxiliary 'did' with the base verb 'have' to form the correct negative past simple: 'No, I didn't.' Suggestion: learn that past simple negatives use 'did not/didn't' + base verb rather than 'am not' or 'was not.'

× Now they are hungry.

✓ Yes, they are popular now.

The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' The student replied with an unrelated sentence 'Now they are hungry.' This is a sentence structure and content error: 'hungry' describes living beings' state and does not answer the question about popularity. Correct form should address popularity, e.g. 'Yes, they are popular now.' Suggestion: respond directly to the question topic and use appropriate adjectives ('popular') rather than unrelated adjectives ('hungry').