Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and grammatically correct but very brief. To improve, give a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (reason, brief memory, or contrast) using a linking word. Keep it natural and no more than 4–5 sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Because my family lived in a small city, we relied more on walking and buses, so my parents didn’t buy one for me. However, I sometimes borrowed a friend’s bike to ride in the park on weekends.

提案: The answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples and use linking words. Use correct nouns and adjectives (e.g., ‘bicycles are not very popular’ or ‘cycling is common among…’). Keep each response concise and natural.

例: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Although some people cycle for exercise, most people prefer cars or motorbikes because of crowded streets and long distances, so cycling is less common for daily transport.

× No, I don't think so. Bike is very busy thing.

✓ No, I don't think so. Bikes are very popular./No, I don't think so. Riding bikes is a very common activity.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'Bike is very busy thing.' is ungrammatical. The noun 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally, and the copula must agree with the plural noun ('are'). Also 'busy' is incorrect to describe an object; 'popular' or 'common' fits the intended meaning. Alternatively, rephrasing to 'Riding bikes is a very common activity' uses a gerund phrase appropriately. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and choose an adjective that matches the intended meaning (popular/common) or use a gerund phrase for activities.