Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần sửa phát âm một vài từ và ngữ pháp cơ bản; tránh từ lặp và dùng từ phù hợp (ví dụ: 'bike' thay vì 'bite', 'rode' kết hợp với 'to school' là đúng nhưng câu cần rõ ràng). Tăng tính tự nhiên bằng cách bắt đầu trực tiếp trả lời, dùng 2-3 câu hỗ trợ, và thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi khi bắt đầu, cảm xúc, khoảng cách đến trường). Hãy chú ý nối các ý bằng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle and I used to ride it to school every day when I was about eight. I enjoyed cycling because it was faster than walking and gave me time to chat with my friends on the way.

提案: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp số nhiều/chủ vị (use 'bikes and motorbikes are'), tránh lặp từ và tiếng ồm ồm ('um', 'is is'). Nên nêu lý do cụ thể và chính xác (ví dụ: mật độ giao thông, chi phí, thời tiết), dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (e.g. 'because', 'so') và hoàn thành câu thay vì bỏ dở. Giữ câu ngắn, rõ ràng (2-3 câu).

例: Yes, I think they are very popular. Bikes and motorbikes are a common mode of transport in Vietnam because they are cheap, easy to park and convenient for short trips. As a result, you see many people using them every day.

× I used to have a small red bite.

✓ I used to have a small red bike.

'bite' is a misspelling; the correct noun is 'bike'. This is a spelling error rather than a grammatical plural issue, but it affects meaning. Ensure correct word choice by proofreading and checking similar sounding words.'

× Thus I rode to school every day when I was a child and I remember writing it with my friend after class.

✓ I rode to school every day when I was a child and I remember riding it with my friend after class.

The student used 'writing' instead of 'riding'. 'Writing' is the act of producing text; 'riding' is the correct gerund for riding a bike. Use the gerund form of the correct verb. Also remove 'Thus' at the start because it is unnecessary and awkward in spoken reply.'

× You know, in Vietnam bike and motorbike is is a common and popular means of transport because the Rose is is not so much wire and umm, we used them every.

✓ You know, in Vietnam, bicycles and motorbikes are common and popular means of transport because the roads are not very wide, and we use them every day.

Multiple errors: 'bike and motorbike is is' has number agreement and repetition errors — use plural nouns 'bicycles and motorbikes' with plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Means of transport' is fine but 'means' is plural so keep plural agreement. 'Rose' is a misspelling of 'roads' and 'not so much wire' should be 'not very wide' (wrong word choice). 'we used them every' is missing 'day' and wrong tense; use present 'we use them every day' to indicate habitual present. Correct each word choice and tense to match meaning.'