Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Keep your answer concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct mistakes (use "No, I didn't" not "No it didn't"), and avoid repeating phrases. Add one brief specific detail using a linking word. Watch sentence boundaries and verb forms ("go on foot" or "walk").

例: No, I didn't. My parents couldn't afford a bike, so I usually travelled by bus or walked to school. For example, I walked about 20 minutes each way, which helped me stay active.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and organize supporting reasons with linking words. Correct grammar ("cheaper than cars and other vehicles"; "Nepal has many narrow roads" instead of "no narrow roads"). Be specific: mention who uses bikes and in which areas. Limit to two or three sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Nepal because they are much cheaper to buy and run than cars. In addition, many people use them to commute in towns and narrow mountain villages where roads are too tight for larger vehicles.

× No it didn't No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one and I used to travel by public transportation or I used to go by walk.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one, so I used to travel by public transportation or walk.

Multiple issues: 'No it didn't' is incorrect response to 'Did you have a bike?' Use 'No, I didn't.' 'Any bike' is awkward; use 'a bike' for singular. 'I used to go by walk' is ungrammatical; use 'walk' without preposition. Combine sentences with a comma and 'so' for clarity. Also remove the repeated 'I didn't' if desired; here repetition is acceptable but punctuation and pronoun usage corrected. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because it's cheaper than cars and the other vehicles and As Nepal as we all know that Nepal has no narrow roads, so it's easier to travel in bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because they're cheaper than cars and other vehicles, and in Nepal, as we all know, the roads are narrow, so it's easier to travel by bike.

Several issues: 'it's cheaper' refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use 'they're' (subject-verb agreement). 'the other vehicles' should be 'other vehicles' without 'the.' 'As Nepal as we all know that Nepal has no narrow roads' is incorrect and likely meant 'in Nepal...the roads are narrow.' Use 'roads are narrow' rather than 'has no narrow roads.' Preposition with 'travel by bike' not 'in bikes.' Also punctuation and clause ordering improved for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27