Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你回答的内容是把考官的问题重复了一遍，未给出任何信息。要直接回答问题并给出一到两句具体细节来支持，例如什么时候有、骑车的频率或与谁一起骑。尽量使用自然的句子并保持在最多五个句子内。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight and rode it almost every day to school and to the park with my friends. It was a blue mountain bike that I loved because it was fast and sturdy.

提案: 你的回答出现了明显的词汇错误（把 "bikes" 说成 "bags"），并且回答过于简短且没有细节。要先直接回答问题，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，使用连接词（例如 "because" 或 "because of"）使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see lots of people commuting by bike, and there are many bike-sharing programs that make cycling convenient.

× Yes, I think bags are quite popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

学生把“bikes”（自行车）说成“bags”（包）。这是代词/名词使用错误，属于名词选择不当（靠近“代词/代称”范畴）。在回答关于自行车（bike）是否流行的问题时，应使用与题目一致的名词。建议：回答时先理解考官问题的关键词（此处为 bike），在表达时重复或使用相应的同义词（如 bicycles）以确保内容准确。