Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn trả lời chưa hiểu câu hỏi và dùng thì/điều cấu trúc sai. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp vào quá khứ nếu câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu, dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn và tối đa 3–4 câu hỗ trợ (mô tả ngắn, lý do hoặc kỷ niệm). Sử dụng từ vựng đơn giản nhưng chính xác (ví dụ: "yes/no", "I had", "I didn’t have", "a small bike", "learned to ride"). Tránh lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “Do you have” → “Did you have”).

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. My parents bought it for my birthday, and I remember practicing every weekend until I felt confident. It was important to me because it gave me freedom to explore nearby streets.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi và có lỗi chính tả/ngữ âm ("buys" thay vì "bikes"). Bạn cần đưa ra ý kiến rõ ràng (Yes/No or It depends) rồi giải thích với ít nhất một lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g. "because", "for example", "however"). Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 câu.

例: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many commuters cycling to work, and there are also weekend cycling groups. However, they are less common in rural areas where distances are longer and cars are more practical.

× Do you have a bike or when you were a child?

✓ Yes. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixed present and past structures and used 'or' incorrectly, producing an ungrammatical sentence. The question asked about the past: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The correct response should use past tense 'had' and a clear affirmative or negative. Suggestion: Match the tense of the question (use past simple) and avoid inserting 'or' unless offering an alternative.

× Do you think buys are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'buys', which is a verb (present tense of 'buy') and not the noun 'bikes'. This is a word choice/pronoun-like error causing the sentence to be nonsensical. The correct noun 'bikes' matches the intended meaning. Suggestion: Pay attention to correct spelling and choose the appropriate word class (noun vs. verb); reread the sentence to ensure the subject refers to the object being discussed.