Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ неестественен и содержит грамматические и смысловые ошибки. Нужно прямо отвечать и давать краткое объяснение, избегая необоснованных утверждений о поле. Улучшите грамматику (например, 'I didn't have a bike' — правильно) и уточните причину: назовите конкретную причину (например, финансовые причины, отсутствие времени или места для катания). Используйте не более 3–4 предложений, связки (because, so, but) и корректные формулировки.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or used public transport with my friends.

提案: Ответ несвязный, содержит паузы, разговорные вставки и неуместные слова ('parkers', 'write them'). Нужно давать ясное мнение, подкреплённое конкретными причинами или примерами. Используйте связки (for example, because, however) и точную лексику (cyclists, bike lanes, popular in cities/rural areas). Ограничьте ответ до 2–4 предложений без заполнителей ('uh', 'yeah').

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. In cities many people use bicycles for short trips because traffic is bad and parking is expensive, while in villages bikes are used mainly for leisure and short errands.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I'm a girl and I was affected with another things.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was a girl and I was affected by other things.

The sentence has tense and preposition errors. 'I'm a girl' is present tense while the context is past; change to 'I was a girl'. 'Affected with' is incorrect collocation; use 'affected by'. 'Another things' is wrong number and word choice; use 'other things'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistency and use correct prepositions and plural forms.

× Probably, yes. I think so, uh, because I live in a village and, uh, there is a lot of parkers and it really sucks, I think.

✓ Probably, yes. I think so, because I live in a village and there are a lot of parkers, and it really sucks, I think.

Use 'there are' (plural) for plural noun 'parkers' instead of 'there is a lot of'. Also remove filler words and add comma for clarity. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'there are a lot of parkers'. Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural nouns and avoid unnecessary fillers.

× Yeah. But if you talk about the whole country, Oh yeah, there are a lot of people who write them, so yeah.

✓ But if you talk about the whole country, there are a lot of people who ride them.

The phrase 'people who write them' is incorrect verb choice; the intended verb is 'ride'. Also remove redundant interjections 'Oh yeah' and extra 'so yeah' for a clearer sentence. Suggestion: choose the correct verb for the action and streamline speech for clarity.