Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, tense consistency, and add a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one specific detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. For example, I used to ride it to school every day, and it helped me feel independent and active.

提案: Use correct subject–verb agreement and natural phrasing. Begin with a topic sentence, then provide a specific reason or example with a linking word. Keep answers concise and coherent.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes. For instance, lots of commuters choose bikes to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Yes, I have a bike when I'm a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense verbs 'have' and 'I'm' when referring to a past time ('when I was a child'). This is a tense error. Use simple past for both verb and be verb to match the past timeframe: 'had' and 'was'. Suggestion: anchor verbs to the same past timeframe (I had, I was).

× Yes, it's popular in our country, a lot of people using bikes.

✓ Yes, they're popular in our country; a lot of people use bikes.

Two errors: 'it's popular' uses singular subject for 'bikes' (plural), so subject-verb agreement requires 'they're' or rephrase to 'bikes are'. Also 'a lot of people using bikes' lacks a finite verb; correct form is 'a lot of people use bikes.' Suggestion: match subject number with verb (bikes -> are/they're) and include the correct present simple verb for habitual actions (use).