Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer simply repeated the examiner's question instead of responding. For Part 1, give a direct, concise answer (1–2 sentences) and then add a specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep answers natural and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I did. I had a bright red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I used it every day to visit friends and go to the park.

提案: Your answer attempts to respond but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Structure your reply with a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details linked with words like "because" or "however." Use correct grammar and precise vocabulary (e.g., "popular," "safe," "commute"). Keep to under five sentences.

例: Bikes are moderately popular in my country, but not as much as in some European nations because road safety is a concern for many people. However, people still use bicycles frequently for short trips and commuting in quieter neighbourhoods.

× It's not as popular as it's in other countries because my country is not a like very safe country.

✓ It is not as popular as it is in other countries because my country is not a very safe country.

The sentence has problems with word order and an extra word 'a' before 'like'. Remove 'a' before 'like' or drop 'like' entirely; here 'not a very safe country' is correct. Also expand contractions for clarity: 'It's' -> 'It is'. Maintain present simple tense 'is' to compare general facts. Suggestion: say 'It is not as popular as it is in other countries because my country is not very safe.'

× So that's why.

✓ So that is why.

This fragment uses a contraction and is a sentence fragment that is acceptable in speech but for clarity use 'So that is why' as a complete clause. It functions as a discourse marker linking explanation to previous sentence. Suggestion: combine with previous sentence: '...country, so that is why.'

× But yeah, normally people use it so often that's a, it's a visual to go somewhere.

✓ But normally people use bikes often; they are a common way to get around.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Use it so often' is acceptable but 'that's a, it's a visual to go somewhere' is incorrect English: 'visual' is the wrong word. Replace with 'a common way to get around' to express means of transportation. Also avoid filler words and repeated contractions. Maintain present simple to describe habitual action. Suggestion: 'But normally people use bikes often; they are a common way to get around.'