Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1, give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (age, how you used it, or a short memory). Keep answers natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and use linking words such as 'and' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight, and I used it to ride around the neighborhood with my friends. Because my parents were busy, riding became my main way to get to a nearby park, which helped me learn independence.

提案: Again, you repeated the examiner instead of answering. Provide a clear opinion first (yes or no), then support it with specific reasons or examples such as urban cycling trends, public bike-sharing schemes, or cultural attitudes. Use linking words like 'because', 'however', or 'for example' to connect ideas and keep it within a few sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many cities have bike lanes and a growing number of people use bike-sharing services. For example, in my city the government introduced a public bike scheme two years ago, so commuting by bike has become more convenient and common among students and office workers.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/communication error. The question uses past tense 'Did you have' and expects a past-tense answer. Use a subject and past-tense verb: 'I had.' Add 'Yes' (or 'No') to make it a clear response. Suggestion: answer directly with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' Note: This correction follows the tense used in the question and fixes the structure by providing a subject and verb rather than repeating the question.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original student response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/communication error. The question is in present simple and asks for an opinion; the reply should include a subject and verb: 'I think...' Use 'are popular' to match the present simple. Suggestion: answer directly with 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.' Note: This correction maintains the present-tense form appropriate for the question and provides a clear opinion rather than echoing the question.