Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需要更自然且信息更充实。时态和单词拼写有误（应为 'went' 或 'used to go'，以及 'bike' 而非 'bank'）。回答应以主题句开头，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达连贯。建议改为：先直接回答（Yes, I did），接着说明频率或时间（I usually/always rode my bike to school when I was a child），再补充具体细节（how far the school was, who you rode with, or a memorable experience）。保持不超过5句。

例: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike to school when I was a child because my school was only a ten-minute ride from home. Also, I usually went with my older sister, which made the trip fun and safe.

提案: 回答过于简短，缺少支持细节和连贯性。应该先直接回答（Yes, I do / No, I don't），然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持你的观点，使用连接词（for example, because, since）说明原因、场景或比较。可提到使用场合（上下班、休闲）、城市与农村差异或政府政策等。保持不超过5句。

例: Yes, I do. In many cities people use bikes for short commutes because traffic is heavy and parking is expensive. For example, bike-sharing programs have become popular recently, making it easy for commuters to ride to work.

× Yes, I did. I always go to school by bank.

✓ Yes, I did. I always went to school by bike.

问题类型：现在时或动词时态使用不当（编码6）。原句中学生在前一句用过去时“Yes, I did.”说明谈论的是过去的习惯，但接着用现在时态“I always go”，时态不一致。其次单词“bank”错误，应为“bike”。建议：当描述过去的习惯时，将动词用过去式或过去习惯表达（如“used to”或“always went”）。此外注意词汇拼写，‘bike’表示自行车。例句："I always went to school by bike." 或 "I used to go to school by bike."