Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct past-tense answer and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Mention when you had it, how you used it, and a brief reason or memory to make the answer natural and informative. Keep it to no more than 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle from the age of six, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because it was lightweight, I learned to ride quickly, and I remember feeling very proud when I rode without training wheels.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence expressing your opinion, then use linking words to add specific reasons or comparisons (for example: because, however, although). Give concrete details about transportation trends and possibly mention who uses bikes and why. Avoid vague phrases and keep the response concise (max 5 sentences).

例: Not really — most people prefer cars or motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for long distances. However, bicycles are popular among students and people in city centers for short trips due to low cost and ease of parking.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student's answer uses the present tense 'have', which is inconsistent. Use the past tense 'did' to match the question. Suggestion: respond with past-tense auxiliary 'did' plus base verb or use past simple 'I had' for clarity (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had').

× No, not really. Some people usually try car and motorcycle.

✓ No, not really. Some people usually use cars and motorcycles.

The question asks about general popularity in the present, so present simple is appropriate. The sentence 'try car and motorcycle' is incorrect: 'try' is wrong verb here and singular nouns lack plural agreement for general statements. Use 'use' to indicate common means of transport and plural nouns 'cars and motorcycles'. Also consider 'in my country' could be added for clarity. Suggestion: 'Some people usually use cars and motorcycles.'