Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваша відповідь містить граматичну помилку і дуже коротка. Скажіть прямо, чи мали велосипед (topic sentence), потім додайте 1–2 деталі (наприклад, хто подарував, як часто їздили, пам’ять пов’язана з ним). Використовуйте правильні часи (past simple) і уникайте зайвих слів. Наприклад: «Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red bicycle my parents bought me for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it to the park almost every day.»

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small red bicycle for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it to the park almost every day because it was close to my house.

提案: Відповідь ясна, але дуже загальна. Почніть із короткої думки (topic sentence), потім наведіть 1–2 конкретні причини або приклади (наприклад, проблеми з інфраструктурою, культура користування автомобілями, зростання електровелосипедів). Використовуйте зв’язки (because, however, for example) для логічності та уникайте абсолютних тверджень без аргументації.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country at the moment because many people prefer cars for convenience. For example, there are few bike lanes in cities, so cycling is often seen as unsafe, although e-bikes are becoming more common among young people.

× Yes, I was a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence uses 'was' which indicates identity, saying the speaker 'was a bike' is illogical. This is a sentence structure and verb choice error: 'have' is required to express possession in the past. Also missing the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: use 'had' for past possession and include the article: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× I think bikes are not popular in my country now.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country now.

The sentence is grammatical but sounds unnatural and slightly awkward in register. Use of 'I think' with a negative copular clause is better expressed as 'I don't think' or rephrase for clarity. Also adding 'very' softens the assertion and matches typical spoken responses. Suggestion: say 'I don't think bikes are very popular in my country now.'